lunes, 23 de mayo de 2016

Well written Paragraph and Topic Sentence -PE#7-

1) Parts of a Paragraph 

  1. Topic Sentence- Interesting topic and your opinion.
  2. Body- Supporting arguments and details of your topic.
  3. Closing Sentence- Restate the topic sentence and leave your audience thinking.
Video taken from:
  • AlexELSvid. (2014) Parts of a Paragraph. English Academic Writing Introduction. Retrieved from https://www.youtube.com/channel/UClvwNCja3aXxqiFrsKC1DPQ





2) Examples of Topic sentences and paragraphs.

A)  Although the interpretation of traffic signals may seem highly standardized, close observation reveals regional variations across this country, distinguishing the East Coast from Central Canada and the West as surely as dominant dialects or political inclinations.

In Montreal, a flashing red traffic light instructs drivers to careen even more wildly through intersections heavily populated with pedestrians and oncoming vehicles. In startling contrast, an amber light in Calgary warns drivers to scream to a halt on the off chance that there might be a pedestrian within 500 meters who might consider crossing at some unspecified time within the current day. In my home town in New Brunswick, finally, traffic lights (along with painted lines and posted speed limits) do not apply to tractors, all terrain vehicles, or pickup trucks, which together account for most vehicles on the road. In fact, were any observant Canadian dropped from an alien space vessel at an unspecified intersection anywhere in this vast land, he or she could almost certainly orient him-or-herself according to the surrounding traffic patterns.

B)  We commonly look on the discipline of war as vastly more rigid than any discipline necessary in time of peace, but this is an error.

The strictest military discipline imaginable is still looser than that prevailing in the average assembly-line. The soldier, at worst, is still able to exercise the highest conceivable functions of freedom -- that is, he or she is permitted to steal and to kill. No discipline prevailing in peace gives him or her anything remotely resembling this. The soldier is, in war, in the position of a free adult; in peace he or she is almost always in the position of a child. In war all things are excused by success, even violations of discipline. In peace, speaking generally, success is inconceivable except as a function of discipline. (from H.L. Mencken, "Reflections on War" [edited]).

C) There are two broad theories concerning what triggers a human's inevitable decline to death.

The first is the wear-and-tear hypothesis that suggests the body eventually succumbs to the environmental insults of life. The second is the notion that we have an internal clock which is genetically programmed to run down. Supporters of the wear-and-tear theory maintain that the very practice of breathing causes us to age because inhaled oxygen produces toxic by-products. Advocates of the internal clock theory believe that individual cells are told to stop dividing and thus eventually to die by, for example, hormones produced by the brain or by their own genes. (from Debra Blank, "The Eternal Quest" [edited]).

Taken from 

  • Turner, D. (2007, August) Review: Topic Sentences. Retrieved from http://arts.uottawa.ca/writingcentre/en/hypergrammar/writing-paragraphs/review-topic-sentences

viernes, 20 de mayo de 2016

Exploring Ideas in Literature- PE#6-

(NEW 23/05/16)
These are my study notes of the text "Exploring Ideas in Literature".
Allen, J et.al. (2011). Literature. U.S.: McDougal Littell.




This Popplet document shows a sketch of the text "Exploring Ideas in Literature" from the book Literature, by Allen, J. (2011). U.S.: McDougal Littell. 


viernes, 6 de mayo de 2016

What's Academic Writing? - PE#5-

(New 21/05/16)
This graphic organizer made in "Popplet application" shows a summary on "What Is Academic Writing?", by L.Lenny Irvin.




How miscommunication happens and how to avoid it.- PE#4-

Have you ever talked with a friend about a problem, only to realize that he just doesn’t seem to grasp why the issue is so important to you? Have you ever presented an idea to a group, and it’s met with utter confusion? What’s going on here? Katherine Hampsten describes miscommunication and how to prevent it.



Miscommunication can bring confussion, animosity, and misunderstanding between people who are exchanging ideas.
In this interesting video, Hampsten proposes that if we know the elements of communication, we can prevent miscommunication.

She assures that if we become active listeners, capable to "read" verbal and non- verbal feedback from others; if we give the same importance to understand others that to be understood; and we become aware that we all have our own ways of seeing the world, miscommunication can be avoided. 






lunes, 25 de abril de 2016

How did English evolve? - PE#3-

What is the difference between "a hearty welcome" and "a cordial reception"? In a brief, animated history of the English language, Kate Gardoqui explains why these semantically equal phrases evoke such different images. 

Gadorqui asserts that when the Normans invaded the English territories in 1066, the aristocracy started using words of French and Latin origin in order to differenciate themselves from the peasantry. The author explains how this historical fact can account for the use of words of Latin  origin in formal discourse nowadays, while words of Saxon origin remain restrained to informal discourse. 

Advice on Academic Writing - PE#2-

This slideshare presentation will help you improve your Academic Writing.
It is a summary from a text published by the University of Toronto.
Hope it is useful for you as it was for me!


viernes, 8 de abril de 2016

Welcome to my Blog! - PE#1-


Hello, readers! My name is Ana Randi and I am glad to welcome you to this site where you will be able to see my evolution in writing.

This portfolio is such a challenging task for me since I am not a techie person. I hope you enjoy this place as much as I do.

Thank you for reading me.